quick write 2/24/14

I failed when I tried to be the best I can be (student,mothers,daughter and sister ) I failed . I was not proud of it but i did not let it bring me down or stop me from being a better person

4/15/15

quick write:i feel my opponent will argue about the opposite and disagree with my claim .they will argue about how relationship are not 50/50 .they would try to prove their counterclaim and prove why they feel that way

4/14/15

quick write:I think my biggest challenge would be trying to find more information for my body paragraphs . I just dont want to keep saying the same thing over and over again .supporting my claim is also a challenge because everybody might agree

3/25/15

 quick write : in order to succeed you have to fail. I feel this is a strong opinion because I have failed and even though I am not doing my best right now but i am working on my way and starting to get all that I need done.

5/8/15

quick write: i do not know how to re-put this quote

final reflection : who came up with this stuff ? why are they feeling that it is right for people to have kids by people they dont love what if they dont want to have kids by these people how come they can not have feeling towards that person

5/7/15

quick write: you would never know what is true .even if it comes from the person it self you dont know what is true.you would never know if something is true until you have a feeling if it is true.

final reflection:my opinion changed after this lesson because I always believed history was true but after the lesson it made me second think about a lot of stuff. people can say things and it does not have to be true .that makes me think about all the stuff i have learned learned in school is it all true .do we really have rights

4/13/15

quick write: My claim is relationships are 50/50 not 49/51 . I believe this claim because its only fair when relationships are half and half because both people have a equal say so in the relationship so if one want to do something then they both have to agree on it if not they not going to do anything at all


heres my draft intro it is going to change when i am done

I believe that all relationships are 50/50 not 49/51. some people think that they own a relationship whether is the man or the woman.i feel there should not be only one person dominant in a relationship i feel that if one person say one thing and another person say another thing if they don't agree then they shouldn't do it at all . In relationship they should both be on the same page .I don't know why men think they can control women and I dont think why women can control men